Minggu, 04 November 2018

Does Good Education Really Guarantee Success Future?


Now, analyze the essay below : find out which one is the Introduction (General Statement & Thesis Statement), Opposing view, Rebuttal, Argument, and conclusion.also, find out which one the way to use in the essay below (Block Point or Point by Point?)




Some people in this world believe that without good education someone will not succeed in future life. As many as 47% of people in the world In the Debat.org forum, they said "After we graduated, waiting for the tools for the job, do you really think that the certificates we have made for centuries will affect us for the key to success? What matters is confidence. Windows Creator, Bill Gates, he is the best example that proves that education does not completely prevent him from becoming a billionaire. Whatever it is, rest assured! "
From the quotation above, I believe that good education is not the main determinant of a person's success in the future. Based on research conducted by the Harvard Business Review published in February 2018, 8% of successful CEOs in the world did not complete their education and did not take a good education. A perfect example of this situation was the creator of the apple, Steve Jobs, who left Reed College because of the fact that his parents could not afford to pay for his education. As we all know, that did not stop him from building an empire that is now worth around $ 100 million. So, even though a good education can help you in building a career path, it does not mean that you will be successful in the future, because the most important qualities to guarantee a successful future are we must become a proven insider, overindex on results and be a talent magnet.
A good education is not mean it will make you successful in the future, not even all graduates with high GPA are easy to get a job. Since good education only builds a career path but that does not guarantee that you will succeed in the future. Furthermore, high GPA is also not a determinant of success, because a high GPA without coupled with good skills and work ethic will be useless.
Besides, based on research conducted by Powell, CEOs without a degree also live on average 25% longer in roles and hold 13% fewer roles than their college graduate executive colleagues. It usually takes 15% longer for them to get to the CEO seat. So, the most important thing to guarantees success in the future is that we must have the skills, have an effort, and never give up. Do not only oriented to GPA, but more skill development is needed.  In conclusion, although good education helps a person to design a career, a good education is not a guarantee of one's future success.



Resources :


Forum Debat.org
Kim Rosen Koetter Powell, E. L. (2018, February 26). Harvard Bussiness Review. Retrieved 10 25, 2018, from HBR webinar: https://hbr.org/2018/02/how-ceos-without-college-degrees-got-to-the-top

Kim Rosen Koetter Powell, E. L. (2018). How CEOs Without College Degrees Got to the Top. Harvard Bussiness Review.



Grade : 90

Written by: Lu'lu Hamid

How to Make an Argumentative Essay


Hellow people... Back again to my blog.
today I'm gonna share the draft about the step to make an argumentative essay.
there are two ways to make it: 1.) using block point 2.) using point by point. Nevertheless, in this term, I use block point to write my argumentative essay.

let's start it....................

Smoking in The Public Places Must Be Prohibited

I.                    Introduction
 













II.                  Body

1.       Statement 1
Opposing view : Smokers have the right to smoke anywhere.
Rebuttal               : Non-smokers also have the right to be undisturbed and free from cigarette smoke.
Argument           : Smoking in public places disturbs the comfort of many people, especially for young children and pregnant women.

2.       Statement 2
Opposing view  : Smoking is an alternative way to relieve stress, if a smoker feels stressed in a public place, to relieve stress, he smokes in a public place.
Rebuttal               : There are other, healthier ways to relieve stress and not disturb other people.
Argument           : Smoking in public places disturbs public comfort because the air in public areas is contaminated with cigarette smoke.

3.       Statement 3
Opposing view  : Humans who smoke or not, both will die.
Rebuttal               : Smoking can reduce human age.
Argument           : Smoking in public places in addition to reducing the age of active smokers also has the effect of reducing the age of passive smokers.

III.                Conclusion
In conclusion, smoking in public places makes the air in public areas is contaminated with cigarette smoke. Furthermore, it can distract the comfort of many people, especially for young children and pregnant women. Besides, Smoking in public places in addition to reducing the age of active smokers also has the effect of reducing the age of passive smokers.


Written by: Lu'lu Hamid


Minggu, 29 Juli 2018

Flood in Central Kalimantan (Borneo), Lu'lu Hamid


(Written by Lu'lu Hamid)

Jogjakarta, Juni 20, 2018

When the rainy season comes, Kalimantan area faces serious problems, one of them such as flooding. A flood is the overflow of water covering the normally dry land. The very heavy rain accompanied by deforestation that occurred in central Kalimantan has caused major flooding in many of the surrounding districts. Based on Central Statistics Agency of Central Kalimantan, in the last three years, the most affected areas are Central Kalimantan. In this case, there are three main aspects related to the causes of floods in Central Kalimantan, those are global warming, deforestation for plantations and the activities of residents around the river.
The first cause is global warming, it is the rising temperatures that lead to the melting of glaciers and icebergs. This melting layer of ice results in rising sea levels resulting in flooding in some coastal areas. Central Kalimantan and all cities in the world face the potential for high floods caused by global warming. It is no stranger to us hearing the word global warming, then the impact of global warming lead to an irregular climate with long rain and cause flooding everywhere. In addition, the construction of buildings that resulted in less water absorption areas. As global warming is able to change climatic conditions, warmer air can hold more moisture than extreme or often increasing rain and intensity of the heavy rain.
            The second, According to environmental activists from Friends of National Park Foundations (FNPF) Basuki Budi Santoso, the floods and landslides were also caused by ecosystems in flooded areas that change into the plantation and industrial. Deforestation in upstream areas because of the development of agriculture, plantations and housing have reduced the absorption of rainwater, trigger large water flows to the lower regions. Forests can help in absorbing excess water. Besides, forests able to help stop the flow of water. Besides, increasing human need, the trees are often cut down indiscriminately. The soil eruption also occurs because of the absence of strong trees that can hold the soil in that place. Because no one is holding back the flow of water, the river will be filled much faster so it can cause the surrounding area affected by flooding. Extreme deforestation often leads to flash floods. Meanwhile, according to Feby Nadia Putri, an English Department student of Islamic University of Indonesia, who from Central Kalimantan, she said that a lot of forests are cut down for the development of agriculture, and the most is the development of palm plantation, that is the main cause of floods in Kalimantan especially Central Kalimantan.
            The third cause of floods in Central Kalimantan is the activity of residents near rivers that cause narrowing of river banks. Furthermore, also many residents who still throw waste in the river, which when the rain comes the river was overflowing because of the amount of waste.
The other case, in Samarinda city, the capital city of East Borneo, located in downstream of Mahakam River has a complex urban disaster history. In addition, flooding and forest fires are the highest frequency of disaster (Rofiq, 2015). Biophysics characteristic is vulnerable to erosion, sedimentation, and floods. These vulnerabilities are supported by types of soil are relatively sensitive to erosion, domination undulating to hilly, high rainfall and river network dominance pattern (drainage network). Floods in Samarinda is happening annually. Length, height and spacious flood that have varied, based on information obtained by Sodik (2015), the duration of the flooding that occurred ranged between 3 –10 hours with the water level between 0,3–1,5 m, while the area of inundation the contained Lempake area, with an area of inundation to ± 200 ha. Furthermore, the construction of roads, buildings, and bridges along the banks of the river also often leads to debris scattered along the banks of the river and on the river bed. The debris caused the height of river water to increase so that the river becomes more easily overflow, causing flooding in the surrounding area.
To overcome flood disaster, there are several things that we must to do to avoid the flood disaster. There are some ways to overcome flood disaster: first, creating river and sewer and make sure they work well. Rivers and sewers are where the water flows so, because of those, try not to be polluted with waste or turned into a garbage dump that eventually causes the stream and sewer to become clogged. Second, Reforestation and relocation of plants, especially with types of plants and trees that can absorb water quickly. Then, Reproduce and provide open land to create green land as a water absorption site. In addition, stop building housing on the banks of the river, because it will lead to the narrowing of the river. Besides, stop building high and sophisticated buildings that will cause the earth more difficult to withstand the burden and the resistant surface is getting down. The last one avoids illegal logging and cutting trees on the riverbank, as trees function to absorb water to prevent floods. These all ways can be done to reduce the flood disaster that often happens in Indonesia.
To sum up, to accommodate the levels of rainwater needs integrated drainage system and an increase in the size of water channels also program to dredge sediment from the city’s rivers, canals, lake, and also decrease deforestation.







Reference :
Badan Pusat StatistikKalimantan Tengah (https://kalteng.bps.go.id/linkTableDinamis/view/id/123)
Sodik, Fajar. (2015). The City Government Efforts in Flood Control in Samarinda (Indonesia version). E-Journal of Government Science, Mulawarman University, Vol. 3 No. 2 page 782-796. Samarinda-Indonesia

Rafiq, A., Idris, Adam, Sugandi.(2015). Studies Program in Disaster Management Flood Disaster in Samarinda City On East Borneo Province’ Disaster Management Agency (Indonesia version). E-journal of Administrative Reform, Mulawarman University, Vol. 2 No. 3 page 1548-1560. Samarinda-Indonesia

Cara Mudah dan Dahsyat dalam Menulis Essay dan Contohnya

Essay Outline

I.                   Introduction
General Statement: A good education system is the most important thing for human beings. It gives people new knowledge and maintains good relationships with others.
Thesis Statement: Indonesia as a developing country has similarities and differences about the education system with Finland.

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